My first pet
This is my pet writing and I know I say this in a lot of posts but I am never good with cameras so you can't see the words but I am going to paste the word in so this is the biggest post I have ever done so get ready to read until you fall asleep ok here it goes
May 13,2019
Journal Entry
All was pitch black,The only noise I could hear was the sound of people talking I looked up I could see a little bit of light I reached out to touch it but right at that moment there was a sudden stop I fell forward I looked up again now two hands are coming for me help! The hands grab me and take me into a building I jump out of the hands reach and run for cover I hide under a bed and fall asleep.
May 14 2019
Fun day
Ahhhhhhhh! Help the hands. nope just a nightmare ok then time to get some breakfast something like that It looks yummy sniff sniff it smells yummy lick lick it tastes yummy gobble gobble it is yummy this place might not be so bad after all .what's that it's called a box whos there it's me Milo the other cat in the family can I come in no! This is my box,fine I,ll just go play with that thing over there and that's a shoe .wow it's dark in here hello anyone there look out the hand says milo where just kidding will you ever come out.yes but not now of course but maybe later.
So that's my story of the first few days in my new home.
Wow Millan that is some good quality writing. You used lots of sounds to make the reader have a picture in their mind of whats happening. Great work! :D
ReplyDeleteThank's Danait I see you have been looking at more then this one.
ReplyDeleteWow that is some really good/amazing writing millan I like how you have made the stories well done!
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ReplyDeleteHarry @ Glen Taylor School
Hi Harry cool post I read the Harry Potter books I am on the last one and your names are the same both harry anyway great post love all of it.Good job ☺️
Peter @ Glen Taylor School
Cool Peter.I love how you decribed everything in the story. If you would like to see my blog it is https://millanslearningblog.blogspot.com/2019/05/cybersmart.html
Danait @ Glen Taylor school
Thank you I have been trying to create stuff like this to put on my blog. Next time I do this I will try harder to make sure it makes sense and not do random things.
Zyah
Thank you Zyah I hope you will keep following my blog on its way to greatness, also check out my older posts, but just warning you they might not be as good as the newer one’s.
Zyah
Also please tell me your blog so I can comment.
sorry something happened there it suddenly just posted all the comments and replies that I have done I will fix soon
ReplyDeleteanyway do not worry about the reply and thank you Zyah I hope you will keep following my blog on its way to greatness, also check out my older posts, but just warning you they might not be as good as the newer one’s.
ReplyDeleteAlso please tell me your blog so I can comment.
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